After an informal exhibition in the corridor, I was able to receive some impromptu criticism.
Peers suggested that I should continue in my attempts to improve the cloud textures and change the overall colour scheme.
I have responded by using some appropriate photoshop brushes to give the clouds a more vaporous appearance. I have also nudged the entire HUE of the image to a sort of midnight-blue which makes more sense considering the lighting effects within the image.
The last addition in the small quote within the image which reads "Hardly any of use trouble to thing of the future we were making. And here it is!" This quote was taken from the relatively short science fiction novel 'The Sleeper Wakes' by H.G. Wells. I thought this quote was most appropriate, as it shows the common disregard for the importance of legacy.... relating to the architectural fiasco of many settings arounds Britain.
I am generally pleased with this resolution, I would however like to screen print the image for the final show.
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